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    Feels like it needs a little more "life".

    Few suggestions...

    I see you have gray for English and black for French. I'd probably try to have a bit more contrast between them. maybe go down to #777 or #888 on the English.

    http://xaviercm.info/00009.html
    The screenshot... That drop shadow is a bit too much.

    "Designer graphique", "Graphic designer"... it feels a little weird to not see the second word capitalize. I'd change it.

    Have you tried a couple of 1px horizontal lines to divide information? I get the minimalistic and grid-based direction, but the blocks of info still look like they are floating a bit without a clear separation between them.

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