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• Amicus0

  I like C, but it reads like romono or ramano. The 'r's (and probably the n's & m's are too wide for the a's & o's fucking up the rhythm and spacing.

  If you are going down this route I'd definitely be less rigid with the geometric look to make it read better.

  Maybe try doodling a little with pencil and paper before going back to the computer.

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  • I think with C he is killing the simplicity with those tiny drop-shadowspressplay
  • easily overcame by replacing the drop shadow with a negative stroke to separate the lettersalbums
  • yeppressplay
  • I agree, but I think it's the purest expression out of the 3Amicus

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