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- kona0
not bad but a couple of things...
- the mask in the logo to me diminishes the product and just isn't working. i'd remove the mask if you can and think of another object to put in it's place
- focus on your grid by removing the two gray boxes flanking the hero, increase the size of the hero to the full width of the content below, then, put that content into a while container and give the content a nice margin. as it stands the content looks odd just floating around like that. it needs to be grounded
- also. i'd work on the i.a. you basically have 6 sections all competing against each other. try and break it down into 3 main secondary sections, then 3 sub-sections with strong ctas (Availability? / Learn more / Investors) with a small blurb for each, nothing more than a sentence or two. They need to be instantly digestible right.
- i like the hand drawn art, maybe incorporate some of that by sprinkling more as icons for the 3 main sections (What is Omnitar? / Who's it for? / How much).
keep pushing. nice start dude.