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Out of context: Reply #15

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    Out of the lot of them, 14 stands out for me. It's good and solid, although - in your shoes - I would see if a similar treatment for 'everything automotive' could be done as in #4. I think doing something similar would help anchor the whole thing (also, I think those speed lines are a touch dated).

    As mydo and maikel have said, though, max 3 options, all on different slides. Bunched up like this makes it difficult to exmine each on its own merits without the others interfering.

    • Also, what I like about 14 is that it's free of car metaphors.Continuity

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