fashion critique
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- bigtrickagain0
there is some pretty nice photography on your site! and, thank you for sharing your first video with us (: i hope to follow in your footsteps some day...
at this point you have more video experience than i do, so keep that in mind when reading the following critiques:
1. parts of the video seem too dark, and parts seem too bright - intentional?
2. when shooting into the lampposts, the reflections in the camera lens are distracting. are you using an uncoated filter? if so, taking it off or replacing it with a multicoated uv filter would lessen the reflections.
3. the shakey motion in your tracking shots is a bit distracting - you might be able to ghetto-rig a steadicam to help you with that, like this one:
http://gizmodo.com/5314613/homem…
4. the street scene where she's walking down the road - the road might have been chosen better, as the parked cars on the left are distracting and make me glance at them, rather than concentrating on the model. in general maybe set up scenes that force attention to your subject more? with lighting and careful shot management?- overall though, very nice, esp. if it's your first video o_Obigtrickagain
- :) yeah - just turned on the video mode when I was shooting. the shoot was just for her and I to work on model photographer relationship really.39steps