ok, I am putting it out for crit.

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  • gabe0

    it's pretty bland, wouldn't you say? i don't mind that approach, just doesn't seem to have much personality or thought behind it.

    a few suggestions to consider... perhaps beef up "ken vella + design". your name pretty much gets lost on the page. also, maybe put a line break between your name and "selected projects, print work"

    i think you should also add a highlighted state for the current project being viewed (and disable the button as well). lastly, i think "say hello" could stand out more. in my opinion that's the second most important thing on the page after your name.

    • lack of personality seems to be a general consensus. i hadn't even seen the othergabe
    • ...responses before i typed mine.gabe

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