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  • ukit0

    As others mentioned, these are way too busy. There's no main focal point/ call to action on either design, instead where I'd expect it in that middle area you're introducing two or three elements of equal weight. I think you need to get rid of the competing messages and focus on one for the home page.

    Also, why is the logo different between the two? In both cases, I don't think it fits the rest of the page so if the logo design is still up in the air I'd take a look at that (separately from the rest of the comp). Just setting it in a normal slab serif that matches the rest of the page (instead of that square font) would help a lot.

    • The logo is different because we've updated it as part of our marketing initiatives for the client.dMullins

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