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Out of context: Reply #18

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  • ukit0

    "What I do, and what I've done"...maybe it is my time spent as a copywriter, but I'm not sure if this choice of words is serving you so well. It's not hugely original and it doesn't even really describe what I see on the page, because you don't describe what it is you do very prominently.

    Javascript and reflections on the thumbnails are nice. I'd consider playing with the layout a little bit more. Would the text look better further up the page or underneath the work? Somehow it feels not quite there...

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