plz crit my GF's site

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  • Nairn0

    Overall, good sold template structure - clean, and easy to relatively navigate

    some observations..

    Intro picture - nonsensical, far too saturated, irrelevant at christmas - and where's the silver?! that heart necklace looks crystal, if so = why?

    minor thing - Jpg compression on xmas delivery shout is terrible.

    the dark red colour scheme jars for me - i know it's in your logo, but I don't associate it with silver.

    Your product shots are over saturated, and i feel there should be at least two per product - 2 different perspectives. Also, it's hard to get a sense of scale - maybe do the QVC thing and include a crappy wooden school ruler in product shots? Also, the lighting isn't always great - they often don't have that jeweller's window sparkle.

    'functionality-nav' (shopping cart, price breaks etc) is slightly un-obvious in that red bar - feels outwith each page's information flow.

    Forms feel a bit slapdash - not as well laid-out as the rest of the site.

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