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  • jaylarson0

    you have some great work! clean up your page so your work really shines.

    lighten the grey from 60%-ish to 30%-ish

    get rid of the bold text. it is muddy.

    make more grid like and keep like shapes with like shapes as mentioned above (i see you are trying to keep work together, but you could also make montages of each assignment as a large clickable image that could link to another page where they are individual and larger)

    i look forward to seeing the next version!

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