poster crit
poster crit
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nice start. good ideas you got going so far, but you can make it better!
i might make that text with the people's names in the lower-right horizontally aligned rather than vertical...its hard to read all of that stuff when your eye has to keep going up and down!
also maybe lose the blue overlay on the "translations" text and go with a solid fill. i would say find a way to make that text stand out just a bit more.
If you make a nice box to go around your date/address text (like allthe other text) you would sort of visually box in your court and ball subject and perhaps create a single focal point where the viewer's eye can be drawn.
i don't know..i'm probably just full of hot air. hope that helps some.