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Out of context: Reply #9
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- rasko40
I tihnk this would be more effective if you dummied up the bottle and had it photographed on a plain background and had the 'don't get burned' line underneath, I peresonally find your background graphics to be self indulgent and rather naive in execution, they actually detract from the message. I would also consider your target audience and consider whether or not they are familiar with the term 'burned' as this may be a non starter or at least you may need to reaffirm the message within the sub copy.