new 'temp' site

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    The design is fine with me. The links should have some indication that they are external imo.

    I don't like the copy above. Since this is a temp site the copy is a main focus.

    You dont need that much explanation. The words temporary site or a one sentence explanation is fine. The way the copy is worded make it sound ameturish: learning and growing experience, reasons why the site isn't up. I especially didn't like using WE thoughout it and at the end stating WE is you. What is the point?

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