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  • ukit

    Like others said, you should probably proofread the entire site. This page, the only one I looked at, had a misspelling or grammatical mistake in every sentence:

    Twice a year The Danish Air Force HOSTS an event that shows possible applicants WHAT life is like in the air force. It was FOR this event that we were to redesign and showcase the 4 possible paths.

    It is widely KNOWN how hard it is to become a fighter pilot. We wanted to make this be KNOWN for the whole air force, no matter WHICH part of it you applied for. (delete semicolon) The air force only takes the very best.

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    • (Changes in caps if that wasn't obvious)ukit
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