Poster Crit
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- Mr_Right0
Just try doing something that's visually interesting. Just make it kick-ass.
- identity0
the red frame stays - put futura black italics, tightly kerned over it - put it in museums
- OSFA0
OK, I see you have a 'purpose' for the red border. But you are asking us to crit your poster yet you choose to ignore the most basic comment and request 'ELIMINATE THE RED BORDER'.
If 90% of people are telling you it must go... maybe you should listen and consider it.
- Trust me, I'm not ignoring your criticisms. Anyway, this is WIP, so watch this space.PeterPancake
- hellojeehae0
i would keep it in one thread
- spendogg0
the red frame must go
- PeterPancake0
The red frame is meant to give it a punchy graphic feel + it represents the Bud colours. Justifying the grain, I would say it gives the image a sense of its creation and certainly separates it from 99% of high-speed photography that you find on flickr.
- i just stopped by to say "what?!"effort
- In the sense that it does not have the look of a slick studio shot.PeterPancake
- ukit0
- true_cut0
I need a beer
- ukit0
"This Bud's For You"
- OSFA0
Dude, seriously... why the RED!!! frame?
- kona0
i love the existentialism prolification of the hypo-exclude theories you're experimenting with. the fosterization, er excuse me, flatulization exuded in the piece overwhelms even the most ludicrous ironeous beliefs. well done.
- < gay lingo.OSFA
- ^sneakybadger
- gay lingo? have you know i went to YALE SIR!kona
- hahaha... how u been dood!? Long time.. how's the baby?OSFA
- i've been good buddy! the little guy is doing great! pulling himself up, standing, smoking, front kicks... all awesome!kona
- i_monk0
Red border says "look at the border, not the picture!!!!!!! OMG ARE YOU LOOKING I'M SO RED!!!"
And like everyone in your other thread said, it's a mess. Clean that shit up!
Photo > Photoshop™ Filter® of your choice > Illustrator® > Live Paint/Live Trace™® > direct select arrow to delete the mess
- akrok0
^
- d_rek0
No.
- PeterPancake0
Seriously, why mutate this honest crit into immature troll-fest?
- cerberus0
"He liked the concept of hurting global brands/established corperations" "provacative"...
I didn't walk away with any of these feelings after viewing that piece. It seems a little pedestrian. More thought needs to go
- tasty0
needs more pancakes.
- i_monk0
Fucking crap.