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- senseg
http://www.itsandreas.com just wanted to have it plain and simple.Thoughts?
- crayz0
Hey 1st thought, the links at the top. feel like google adwords. your work looks brilliant. the times new roman feels a touch small too and tight. they lay out is simple and would work if the typography was right.
- scenek0
some small things i notice:
line length is a bit long on the info at the top.
titles of the work are sandwiched so it isn't initially clear if they're for the image above or below.
the links at the top are a little lost, look kinda like google ads.
- senseg0
fixed the links at the top
- crayz0
Links are looking better. but i would not have them the same colour as the body copy? maybe drop them back more with a lighter shade of gray?
- gentleman0
freelance not Free-lance
also check your grammar on that line
putting your bacardi stuff on black like that makes it seem like the whole thing is one site instead of screens from the same site.
- akrokdesign0
some space between each slide would be nice.
- akrokdesign0
"Digital Softbox" looks really small compare to the rest.
- was going to comment that too. otherwise nice work in your folio.sureshot
- senseg0
thank you guys.
- hellojeehae0
i like it :p
- utopian0
Some nice work that you have there senseg.
You should try the: c a r g o c o l l e c t i v e website templates.
- NotByHand0
Great collection of work, Senseg.