logo critique
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- luckyorphan0
...and what do you do in your portfolio?
The more info the better, if you don't mind.
- Ickle0
i do this http://camelianedelcu.wordpress.…
- is this a joke?monospaced
- oh, I finally found the workmonospaced
- luckyorphan0
What do you want people to feel when they see your logo?
Oh, and never put a light bulb in a logo for a creative person.
Ever.
- is a ballon, but i know is to small to see it , but why not a bulb ? explain please .Ickle
- my bad...looked like a bulb in preview size. my apologies.luckyorphan
- but, since you asked, a light bulb for a creative is simply too clichè. "I have ideas!" Yeh, so?luckyorphan
- I thought it was a candle.dbloc
- yes i know is a cliché, i'm not going to use :) thank you for explain me, i though that is something else.Ickle
- VectorMasked0
- you suppose to put the write more down, so do it again you smart Boy.Ickle
- this is why men outnumber women on QBN, 70:1.luckyorphan
- ...or should I say 'boys'luckyorphan
- why ? because there rude ? is ok for me. is the easy way to show something "clever "Ickle
- why down? It's pointing upwards.VectorMasked
- she is a girl. be a bit more considerate next time, Vectormasked.janne76
- luckyorphan0
Crit: Legibility is not really too bad, but I would lose the head. Strip away your multiple messages and get to the point – your script treatment is feminine enough. If you're ickle, and thus, small, reflect that in your logo. Play with how the word sits within the circle. Perhaps it sits low, as in it's not too tall. I think it is stronger on its own, and outside the circle, frankly. But watch how your letter forms merge from one to the other, and into something else. At times, I see "ickle," and others, I see "idle."
My two cents.
- monospaced0
This thread belongs in lol of the day ( http://www.qbn.com/topics/605948… ). My face hurts from laughing so hard. Thanks guys.
- i'm glad that your happy, is the most important think in life, to smile. but WARNING : you could die for to much laughing ;)Ickle
- you're right, I should mind my health and leave this thread forevermonospaced
- follow your thoughts ;)Ickle
- utopian0
needs more bevel!
- sublocked0
this logo is icky. i don't like it. no sir.
- janne760
as a wordmark by itself i can see the merits, the extra visual distracts it and the one in the first version, with the head, is way to detailed to be applied in a good way.
- Corvo20
Don't strip down your original idea to make it convenient and accepted. Even if it wasn't perfect, it was far more original and interesting than what you eventually get if you try to please everybody. You should reflect upon the critics you received, but don't lose your own way.
* eats fortune cookie.
- ceiling_cat0
DUDE! YOUR LOGO LOOKS LIKE CUM!
- we've been over this alreadymonospaced
- you're still a bitch, get banned againceiling_cat
- banned? psshhhmonospaced
- ceiling_cat0
The first "I" looks like a dick pointing at a woman's face.
The "C" has a nipple to the left
The "L" is penetrating the "C"
The color white with the bevel reminds me of semen.- That says more about you than anything, and it's disturbing.monospaced
- ceiling_cat has issues.luckyorphan
- I made the universe in 3 days, what do you expectceiling_cat
- rkrd0
this looks so forced it can only survive if it's a parody. if it's not, I would take out a brush and start over, watching contrast this time.
- janne760
what is it for really?
i makes me think of a hair salon, or a hip coffeeshop... maybe fashion.
- Ambushstudio0
I dig, the L is the only one that looks weird to me, to thin maybe...
- Projectile0
when its big you cant read it. So simplify a little. So far i like the red sticker best. and yes, when you simplify, try to de-cum it a little. A colour that's not white might do the trick. ..and the bevel is a little dated, 'fraid. Maybe a gradient.. subtle one.. for a more 3d look
- luckyorphan0
If it's intended to be a logo, develop it like a logo. Do the basics: Start with black on white, reduce it to the size of a dime, place it on composite concepts (a truck, a shirt, a box, etc.) and see if it holds up.
Then test it somewhere else, where you'll get honest feedback instead of a bunch of juvenile comments and bullying photoshop hackery.
- :) they choose the easy way, the stupidity .thanks'Ickle
- akrokdesign0
here you can peek at others (QBNs) logo.
---> http://www.qbn.com/topics/573718…