Logo crit
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- TomBac0
Clean and simple, redesing
- rkrd0
if the viewer goes WTF it's not always interest, it's just one step to forgetting the mark completely. besides, the thin lines don't work at all atm and if you take them away it's even more WTF if you know what I mean
- Hm. They should be as some sort of dynamics, and be support for heavier line.TomBac
- Etype0
ha sorry dude... i am just having fun
- TomBac0
Well I want to make a symbol of this one.
So it makes viewer wonder, wtf is this. The package envelopes when viewer see rest of complete project.
- TomBac0
Opff, doesnot... man I don't get you.
Could you be little more explanatory pls.
- Etype0
the blue thing looks like a hotdog going into a packman
- doesnotexist0
just drop that blue g- it's perfect.
- TomBac0
God bless you akro, that is opinion.
But then again you wouldn't find it somehow ordinary?You as designer wouldn't find that as unoriginal solution.
That is question and not meant to be provocative one.
- rkrd0
I don't think anyone would get the mark. Even after your explanation I still don't get it. On the type, a two-storey g was already mentioned, it's a good solution, and not that common with such purely geometric faces. the e is very, very dark, the crossbar doesn't need to be the same wight as the other strokes and it doesn't have to be mathematically circular either, rather optically.
- Etype0
- or something like thatEtype
- Thanks man. Cheers.TomBac
- NOOOOOOOOO!monospaced
- OOOOOOOOOOOOO!JayCee
- akrokdesign0
- on the 2nd one, might want to customize the e.akrokdesign
- yeah 2 form of typeface is similar
to one I was drawing.TomBac - i like the second one
Etype
- rkrd0
- TomBac0
And then I tried to apply above mentioned rules in to letters.
Typeface is done by my smallness.
Hm, problem is that I tried to use few of rounded fonts. and all of them seams to distinguished a lot from sign.
I'm trying to imbue numbers in to letters. But it seams that that wouldn't workLogo should be for corporate identity.
- TomBac0
Sign. Equatorial axis. Notice that width of smaller line goes in negative space (blue) which surrounds two circular forms which unifies.
Smaller line goes double with width and length in to middle line.
Smaller inner circle is double of length of smaller line.
Outline is width of smaller line. I tried to imbue mathematical rules
into this one.Planet Earth with Sun in background. And 3 lines are bursting rays.
23,44° - 90° = 65,66°
- akrokdesign0
- deliciousvitamins
- OK this one would look nice if that is brand for chewing gum.TomBac
- they sell glow sticks. :-Dakrokdesign
- era4O40
oops. take a look at the logo at the above link (which should've been below) and how they make it energetic, colorful and fun. Your, while decent in design, doesn't really "say" "we glow". maybe it's not meant to. I don't know what you do...in fact, we shouldn't really be having this conversation until we know what WEGLOW is.
- oh dude, that's fucked up...he might take you seriouslymonospaced
- man please do not offend my perspective on things around.TomBac
- akrokdesign0
yeah, that tail on the g has to be fixed. you could fill in the "e", "g" and "o" also, if you want to keep the font you have.