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- Thesocialgospel
Hi, looking for portfolio critique, thanks!
www.danielzender.com
- Mishga0
- Thanks! I am trying to find an organization to donate it to right now, if anyone works for any hiv/aids foundation or knows someone, please let me know
Thesocialgospel
- Thanks! I am trying to find an organization to donate it to right now, if anyone works for any hiv/aids foundation or knows someone, please let me know
- digdre0
nice , bookmarked.
- juhls0
I like your style.
- ozzobucco0
great concepts! i really liked:
- lowimpakt0
nice
- baseline_shift0
personally, i would try and add a touch of personality to your site. I know minimal is good for a folio, but just a bit of color and a logo or something would go a really long way, IMHO.
I would also think about pulling out some of the work in there. Its all solid, but some of it is really similar. You could stand to cut a few of the grungy/distressed projects, which would help push some of your cleaner solutions forward. (well rounded is good, IMO)
This is neato!
- I agree, well rounded is important. what solutions do you recommend taking out?Thesocialgospel
- baseline_shift0
i would cut
http://www.danielzender.com/inde…
http://www.danielzender.com/inde…The other thing is, you have many posters and a gig poster section. I would give some thought to just making it a poster section and putting the posters in there. (Except for maybe 1 or 2 you wanted to push forward. Like the above example)
- ozzobucco0
i agree you should make a tighter cut of your works and i dunno if its my broadband but its not loading fast enough
- Thesocialgospel0
Thanks guys, keep em coming!
- Thesocialgospel0
once last bump....
- d_rek0
Excellent body of work. Love the illustrative style you have going.
- Thesocialgospel0
thanks!
- ceiling_cat0
good job