Logo Crit
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- Nairn0
I don't like the way the green base of the house floats on its own like that.
The 1 in the form could be bolder and more integral, and the text is a bit meh.
- bump790
I see how you are trying to get the "L" in there as the base of the house, but I think it would read better on the left of the house standing up. Otherwise, it is useless, because you can't read it at all. The font could use work.
- OHH. It's an L?
No. Don't do that.Nairn - i didnt see the L. i thougt, what the f is that green thing.baseline_shift
- that's what I was getting at. What is the point of having it there if you can't tell what it is?bump79
- OHH. It's an L?
- baseline_shift0
simplify that house.
make the 1 the chimney, coming up from the left.
the type to text size ratio feels unbalanced.
think about putting the type all on one line.
- studderine0
^ what he said.
- mantra0
thanks.
everything seems a bit thin to me.. both in the mark and the type.
im working on variations and new ideas for this, just wanted some feedback to start
- typist0
- doesnt look like an N. make the house the A.baseline_shift
- skt0
- ok_not_ok0
i think the house concept is played out.
- OSFA0
Yeah, it gets too generic. I would try a different approach
- Josev0
- +10 - house is WAY cooler nowrippedursite
- 1 looks like a chimneyrippedursite
- hitler house?jgilmore
- LOLdigdre
- I actually like thatmonospaced
- winner.jtb26
- +5Ravdyk
- digdre0
how about you flip that L and 1
- lukus_W0
use the L and 1 to create half a house.. as it's a loan you're gonna get the house bit by bit.
- maybe a loan company logo should insuate that you have to pay something backlukus_W
- insuate?rippedursite
- gah, no.. insinuatelukus_W
- akrokdesign0
quick question, how many ideas had you come up with before you posted this one? as it looks like your 1st idea.
- it would be nice to see his other concepts, or more conceptsJosev
- skt0
- sexy...I like this sktComplexfruit
- I like that, it has a little more authority/institutio... qualityJosev
- best concept so far. by far.
Even the number one still resembles a structure like a building or a house without being so obvious.VectorMasked - ...so obvious.VectorMasked
- me likey.Gucci
- Now this is looking solid. Financyacrossthesea