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- airey0
client loves it? send him the files. bill him. job well done. next.
- PonyBoy0
- i find it helpful to put the logo 'in play'... you know - see how it works with real world applicationPonyBoy
- I see what you did there ;)version3
- ha hascarabin
- welcome to the show... I kick your ass nowTyposapien
- forcetwelve0
- why not lower the top of the bottom stroke of the G to match the height of the "uns"version3
- good pointforcetwelve
- i want the stroke on the word 'for' to be as thick as everything else now...PonyBoy
- ... and the G feels a little punched from behind (bent weird on the butt of the letter whereas your other strokesPonyBoy
- are really smooth (flowing)... the G just feels scrunchedPonyBoy
- d_rek0
Tried scaling back the 'for' ? I see that as a quick fix... The new 'g' is more successful than the old one but feels less flowing and refined... i would finess the stroke a little more on the upper part of it.
- version30
F12 if you could just add an 'm' in there in place of the 'n' you can send it over and we'll be done ;)
- Typosapien0
connecting “r” and “H” is a bit much. “for” could be much smaller. space between “H” and “i” needs more finessing. looks very nice overall! would love to see what you end up with.
- forcetwelve0
- the bottom left side seems lacking like it's overall not at the same angleversion3
- It's starting to look like a lot of different typefaces being forced to work together.acrossthesea
- narrowdesign0
- the G just needs to match the stroke weight and I think she is ready to goTyposapien
- hey nice. thanks. will look into it.forcetwelve
- yeah i like this one...
gp fpr this`!jimzyk - go for this, even!jimzyk
- letters20
You could hire Ale to draw one for you.
http://www.sudtipos.com/home
- forcetwelve0
- :D this turned out great!NONEIS
- I'd still smooth out the stem of the "r" where it joins the "H" and would make the "G" closer to the size it was from "narrowdesign" (angle could tilt more to the right as well). But all-in-all this baby's looking good! Good job.Brian_Piper
- ..."narrowdesign" above. And it could tilt a bit more to the right. Looking good though!Brian_Piper
- print it. ship it. bill it. done.Typosapien
- airey0
- i see what you did there...Typosapien
- thanks for noticing.airey
- airey0
- what font is that airey?forcetwelve
- aphrodite pro and mrs eaves (byline). http://new.myfonts.c…airey
- lolWeLoveNoise
- mistermik0
nice reversed.
- forcetwelve0
i guess i should have mentioned it's a new creative agent/representation startup.
- WeLoveNoise0
f12 - think the problem may also be in the tail - maybe lose the loop
- what problem?forcetwelve
- dnt matter - dnt listen 2 meWeLoveNoise
- i'd like to. it's ok. let's talk.
;)forcetwelve - lol
was gona suggest missing out the loop at the bottom of the G but looking at the most recent it look perfect 2 me. gud job !WeLoveNoise - design it looks perfect to me
gud job, and funny thread :)WeLoveNoise - haha! thx mate.forcetwelve
- dyspl0
Looks very nice!
great to see you going further despite the client was already ok.
The swirl on the top left H looks a bit strange to me, but well who cares.-airey's Cunts for Hire is nice also, love the fonts!