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- identity
Okay - posted on here a few months back with a site that, well, wasn't a site - you had to download a PDF to see my work. Now my site is up and running and I just wanted to get some feedback on somethings. Is the order okay? am I telling the stories of the projects well enough? haha - are there any typos in my descriptions (Ive been over them MANY times, but probably missed something) any advice/help you guys can give will be über appreciated. Thanks guys!
http://www.sleepworkeatworksleep…
- polly_pocket0
the typography is bold and strong. I really like it at first glance.
- Mau0
nice
- this could be sharper
http://www.sleepwork…Mau - it DOES look somewhat dithered... Lemme take another stab at itidentity
- save it as a png-24Mau
- i noticed this too! png is a good call.baseline_shift
- this could be sharper
- baseline_shift0
Your opening line is funny. Nice way to open it up.
Work looks good. I question the need for the name of the project on in the thumbnail and underneath it. Lose it underneath, as you still have it on the nav to the right, and it will appear as a header above the work.
I like how clean it is, but maybe lose just a bit more of the cargo defaults. Different hover colors and a new favicon would do a lot, methinks.
Overall, strong work. *High five.
- Stitchy_Lizard0
Nice work!
- BattleAxe0
clean, functional , quick, i likes it
- Stitchy_Lizard0
not really a fan of the small serif web text though. It appears choppy
- fyoucher10
The index button (aka back to portfolio button) needs to be more noticeable. A loooot of people are probably going to miss that, say f$%k it and leave your site.
Red type on homepage is blurry.
Get rid of Mac-based browser skins for interactive work and the QT Player skins. Can't stand when people do that.
Use less dropshadow on folio items.
A logo would be nice. Something with a little more personal...
- personality...fyoucher1
- how would you suggest I show web/movies?identity
- you can embed videos in the project page. http://cargocollecti…baseline_shift
- identity0
replaced the header with a JPG instead of the GIF that was there before - i attempted to use PNG24, but Cargo just shows a black box - any suggestions to get around that? or is that just how Cargo is rolling for now?
- ive got a png as my cargo header. works fine. strange.baseline_shift
- ah - fixedidentity
- Ironmonkey0
Solid.
Transitions are as smooth as Dave Chappelle's balls.
- skt0
nice update...
agree with mau though, if i hadn't known it was a cargo job i would probably have missed the previous next, especially as they are in different places throughout your work... maybe have everything in one sequence, or highlight the buttons further in some way.
but a nice strong portfolio.
- thx man! Im working on remedying that problem as we speak - thanks for the initial help way back when :-Didentity