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- jimbojones0
The B middle bar consists of 4 strokes, but others only of 3, it appears far too massive. The upper and lower counter don't have to be exact the same, use some tricks
- jimbojones0
Looks too forced now. Try to play with the roundness, and take your time. No really, let it work in your mind and the try again, it will get better. That's the thing with lettershapes, they need time
- eah. maybe it's too wide now also. i'll keep playing around.forcetwelve
- Gifto0
How about joining strokes of the B at the middle, rather than keeping them seperate?
- yeah could be a goer also. like the prisma font doesforcetwelve
- Gifto0
- very niceforcetwelve
- cool!jimbojones
- very nice.Jnr_Madison
- jimbojones0
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- forcetwelve0
going out for brekky. it's only 8am here! thx heaps for all your help guys. it's been great.
- gramme0
Looks good forcetwelve. I'd recommend opening your kerning through INE. As is, WI looks too wide, but after looking at ABEL I think it's because INE are too tight.
I'd pull the belly of your B in a bit.
I like the semi-serif touch. Really dresses it up.
- Amicus0
The inner line of the B's top counter seems to have too much curve compared to the outer lines.
- neverblink0
nice job Force12!
I'd like to see the 'A' just a tad closer to the B, same for the 'W' and 'I'.. but I guess at this level it becomes personal preference.. anyway.. nice job!
- jimbojones0
if you leave it like this, it's mediocre work. it's all about details, why stop here? in a few years you will think why the fuck didn't I take the time to make it a great logo instead of an ok logo?
- Amicus0
I think you still need to tweak the space between the lines.
Eg. B stem lines look closer than bowl lines. W and A look a little heavier than horizontal strokes on E and L. E stem also looks closer.
Print it out as big as you can and take a look from the other side of the room. Or blur it in photoshop and have a look at the grey values for an idea of what is darker or lighter.
- monospaced0
The W really should be wider. Traditionally it is the widest of all the characters. Widening it would also create angles that are closer to those in the N, which could help with the overall harmony. Good night.
- Juddly0
Interesting to see the progression of this.
Looks MUCH better at full size. The preview in PVN is deceiving, with the irregular pixel line weights. When it's all finalised you'll need to do a screen optimised version... lol, that will be fun...
- monospaced0
Now he B feels kinda fat in comparison to the other letters.
- Amicus0
Looking better in terms of the colour of each stroke. I agree with mono about the W... it is slightly thin. I wouldn't necessarily use the same Angle as the N (though it does Alias much nicer).
The B needs a little tweaking, or at least a little more kerning.
looking better every round though :D