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- andrewwwahlin
Criticism? Hit me.
- zenmasterfoo0
in the face.
- Carl_Weathers0
Nope. Brilliant stuff.
- bolus0
get rid of the i can haz cheeseburger link....
- set0
Honestly, the work looks like it could have been widely accepted as fairly nice design in 1990.
- rson0
I would change your name. It doesn't roll off the tongue. Maybe try something like Max Powers. GL
- Ruffian0
Very generic and dated.
- brandelec0
for a start, i would get rid of the splash page - very useless
and i would take out the black background
- Raniator0
I like it. Well done.
You stopped working in 1988, right?
- that's what i was thinking...Mishga
- if there was internet then...ESPtype
- LOL.refunktion
- set0
'I like long bike rides, sunsets over the Gulf, trips to NYC, and mocking people who use Papyrus or Comic Sans.'
To have this in your biography is highly ironic considering that, in my opinion, the work in your portfolio is on the same lines as comic sans and papyrus.
Don't mean to cause offence, just being honest.
- Man210
i think you should take care about typography. style and sizes could be done much better. ;) remember..read pixel is different than full and clear printed texts.
- jsaul0
rethink
- CallerNo90
don't know where or how to begin
- plusminusbox0
if you want black background i would do something with the white it's boxed in and doesn't really work.
- andrewwwahlin0
the black was too much. thanks for constructive criticism.
- OSFA0
Explore new typefaces.
- Leigh0
I think you need to work on your design, start learning the basics, layout, alignment, grids, type ect.
- ian0
After visiting the site I was extremely disappointed to discover that you're not a jazz saxophonist.
- creative-0
Looks good.