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- capn_ron
I'm working on this site and am pretty deep. Any comments would be welcome.
http://www.getcardedink.com/test…
the pages that are not done are
videos
you
background
- capn_ron0
I'm going to bed so I'll check up in the morning. California time.
- Amicus0
on a two second glance it looks too corporate for the style. Tatts and sunnies don't match the site...
- hellogoodbye0
Work on that grid a bit. Your content is well below the fold. The typography and use of white space in the header is not pleasing. A lot of tension there. And you have too many font sizes going on. Start simple and add on...
On the product pg, the type needs more margins...
Overall the structure of the site is weak and needs more visual balance.
- kgvs720
Reduce the size of the photograph. It's taking way too much space.
- doctor0
You need to do something about your code:
1. Your code doesn't validate, which means it's unpredictable.
2. HTML tables are NOT for layout. http://www.alistapart.com/storie…
3. For your own sake, move Javascript and CSS to their own, separate documents, ie. mystyle.css and dropdown.js, and link to them.
4. Semantic HTML would make your work easier. http://www.thefutureoftheweb.com…For the rest of it, I very much agree with hellogoodbye on his comments.
If you haven't been using a grid at all, which I suspect, then you probably don't have time to do it now. So I'd say you should add plenty more white space as priority #1. Wider margins especially.
Hope I didn't knock the air out of you. :)