Grammar Posters
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- ********0
shit project....
- ian0
Well if you're going to use the correct grammar, perhaps you should do it properly?
- janne760
after mate,
why so little space?
- Dancer0
sorry, I have no idea what they are. Is it a straw sucking a comma?
plus, there is a typo on the first one
- ian0
Nice one mate, cheers!
Well, there was Hayley, Charlotte, Beth and Martin's mum.- Second one is still a fragment.blaw
- Yeah, Im not really getting the second one at all, even after changing the punctuation.ian
- I think it's also proper to put a comma after "Beth".Jaline
- But not necessary, depending on where you live.Jaline
- I don't agree with that, the 'and' is instead of the comma to signify the end of a particular listWolfboy
- ********0
shit like ryboo.. well my team have more than proficiency in logo design.. thats why my business website www.logobench.com is successful./..
- Jimbo820
Took me a while to realise what the white stripes were, maybe look at those a bit.
- janne760
Isn't it:
Nice one, mate. Cheers!
but hey, i am only Dutch, so that is a wild guess..
- neue75_bold0
hahahahahahaha...
- thebottlerocket0
Not really getting the concept here although I like the idea of 'conversations in a pub' as its quite a nice device as you often mis-hear conversations in a pub because of the noise, etc.
Is the idea more along the lines of "Eats, roots and leaves" where the presence of punctuation actually changes the message from something embarrassing to something meaningful.
- ahahahaha. I doubt you should read that much into it. But a good idea there.ian
- jimzyk0
make it bigger.
make it redder.
- thebottlerocket0
And yes, still no idea what those white stripes are....
- NotByHand0
Not a terrible concept in my opinion.
You might want to get the grammar in your sentences down though - otherwise it kind of defeats the purpose, no?
And also refine the arms/hands as mentioned above.
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On a separate note, I would like to point out that you've just been "falco'd" - a level of creative criticism previously unheard of (exceeds even the most clueless of clients).
- rybo0
thank you to the people that gave constructive critism. much appricated all took into account and i will work on them,
- thebottlerocket0
out of interest, the white straws...I can't really figure them out, can you fill me in? Its bugging me.
- They are arms! holding a pintrybo
- i thought they were two pipeslocustsloth
- They look like two coloured nostrils doing a line.thebottlerocket
- thebottlerocket0
There are some funny grammar gags i know of.
Priest checks into a hotel, and asks the lady behind the desk, "I hope the porn channel in my room is disabled"
- ********0
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- Dancer0
Whilst you're at it Rybo. Look at your kerning. Also, make sure elements are noticeably different in relation to alignment, if they are out on slightly it really distracts the eye, I am specifically talking about the left and right "arms" in the top image