logo crit
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- ********0
for mistermik
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- moamoa0
naaa... now it reminds me on this...
- ********0
it's unnecessarily wide.
- did you saw eagle wings? yes?********
- well, of course, the wing is obvious. but i think it might help if you want to see the E better.********
- logo's shouldn't be to obvious though! :p********
- i'm just saying, i didnt know to look for or even notice an E until you said it.********
- ALSO, MAKE IT BIGGER.********
- did you saw eagle wings? yes?
- mistermik0
haha sorry digdre - nothing wrong with original.
just in the uk brown wings are awarded to gentleman when they have deflowered the lady anus.
- how many do you have?7point34
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- with your dong, complexfruit?7point34
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- brains0
I dunno, why is there only one version to choose from right off the bat? Try more, then refine.
- ********0
moamoa, we don't had the appointment to create a logo for a company or any event or something, just about, an animal.. :p
i mean, a eagle..is kinda sporty.. he flies..much? if you get my point,- jap, and as I told you before its not bad, but could be better, you should invest mroe time ;)moamoa
- i will i will :D********
- tasty0
grey with brown outline is nice.
it's for school?- ye, not the schools logo, but a school assignment********
- ye, not the schools logo, but a school assignment
- johndiggity0
vary the line weight a bit. i think that will help with the mis-registered look also.
- moamoa0
moamoa, we don't had the appointment to create a logo for a company or any event or something, just about, an animal.. :p
- An Eagle is fast, strong aggressive and so on...
and I miss that fact in your design.... it look more like a logo for a birdy ;)
- ********0
i'll post some updates tomorrow.
- flashbender0
- THANK YOU. it's been bugging me this entire time.********
- aggresive strong and fast = rightmoamoa
- here to helpflashbender
- but then yu go with the head again.. :p********
- THANK YOU. it's been bugging me this entire time.
- dearhead0
You definetly don't have to listen to me, but if I sorta feel like you've gone the most obvious route. It's okay, don't get me wrong. I dig the E, your starting to get at speed with line weights, colors are getting closer... But really this feels very concept light.
It's not very memorable, given its obvious nature, and the overuse of the standalone wings as logos. It's not 'ownable' (I.E. it's very much an icon still, not a logo.. this would work just as well for a Hawk, or really any bird of prey, minus your little hidden "E"), its just very expected. I feel like 100 highschools use a logo similar to this for there football team. For a school project, your probably looking at a decent grade, yadayada, but it just feels like what were looking at is the first step in the ideation process, I feel like its something that you would draw on the first sheet of paper you got.
If your struggling for direction, I would try to go deeper, away from the physical traits of the eagle... and see where it gets you, you might have to rely on the physical traits in the end, but experimenting will get this logo a lot further.
- Amicus0
Why can't a logo look like an icon??? No harm in it - if it meets the brief.
- rodzilla0
it kinda has your vita fit look and feel.
- ********0
does this looks more 'speed'
- looks a lot more like an E********
- but yeah, speedy too.********
- getting better... don't like the thick stroke though... and you could refine your curves more.********
- think about the way the lower left hand 'joint' area works too.. maybe sharper?dearhead
- looks a lot more like an E
- hallelujah0
the inevitable result of qbn logo crits is to make them worse
