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- senseg
i decided to go with flash
www.sensegraphy.com
im working on the thumbnail enlargment script nowthoughts?
- digdre0
you work at 2advanced?
I suggest... emr.... ah no.. fuck it..nice work!
- i dont work theresenseg
- oh ok :p I thought so because you had that name in your porfolio list :p nvm thendigdre
- just had to do some work for themsenseg
- what r they like to work withWeLoveNoise
- tbh, i think they are not that "evil"digdre
- JerseyRaindog0
As a non web person the site looks amazing to me. Some of it's a bit over the top though like switching between pics of one project. Oh and it took forever to load on my crappy connection. And when it had loaded it still said loading in the right hand column. Other than that pretty swish.
- graphito0
like it!
- tank020
Nice.
- typist0
excellent works!! typography need to work up a bit, mind the widow in the introduction and stuff page, even the "e-mail" break is weird in the intorduction...
- rluna0
The transitions in the background are nice, but the swooping sound and movement as you go from one image to the next seem a bit cheesy.
- +1 - it's the swooshing movement that bothers me, not so much the sund.JerseyRaindog
- skt0
i like it. mostly.
couple of things... why do you have such small screenshots of the work when everything else is so big? and i think the transitions between the screenshots would work better as a simple wipe or similar. again, don't really like the transitions between the background images. too much going on.
apart from that though, works reall well.
- moamoa0
very good, site & your work... its not my style but I think it works perfect for your target group.
and I agree with typist the typo needs some work.
- skt0
oh, and i would lose the 3D services thing. it looks like it is there for the sake of having a 3D thingmie and doesn't really fit the rest of the site.
- skelly_b0
Nice start. You have a nice simple layout that's functional. But the animated transitions are over the top. The animation, like the layout should be subtle, more reserved. I also agree the images of your work are too small. That is what people are here to see, make them big. Maybe rethink the the design a little and make the background image the main focus.
- rluna0
Not sure. Maybe a change the pitch of the swooping sound or have a different sound all together, something a little softer. Maybe you could reuse the swooping sound you have going from section to section on the far left.
- kinobe0
well... i like it
- ukit0
Great site.
The one thing I would change is the transition of the screenshots as others have mentioned. Also the top margin on the "box" where you display your work seems way too small, and the "Recent Projects and Clients" looks out of place - make it match the typography to the left better.
- kinobe0
like the overall navigation and interaction to the site.
preloader is abit dodgy tho - i like it but does something wierd at the end of each cycle
- silentseven0
Yes, it looks much better now that you got the work in there. Im still not sold on the DNA spinning thing for the services etc... But rad either way.
- SigDesign0
I like it... all the transitions are well done. The sounds don't bother me... I actually like how the whole background changes. Loads awfully fast on my MacBook...
- Fariska0
Definitely great.
Bit over the top on some details as others pointed out but it may be mostly a question of taste but I'd lose the sounds anyway.
- livelikebruce0
Very nice job. Great body of work as well.
- dbloc0
why aren't you showing samples from the big name companies?