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- xhanubis
http://www.designbythink.com not terribly original but I just wanted to make something direct and easy to update.
All opinions welcome.
- VectorMasked0
only suggestion...
get rid of the caps when using small caps. It's noisy an dhard to read, and you are over doing it from your logo to the scopes to the personal info.
- piperboytoy0
your kerning is not very well done, needs to tighten things up in the headers. I see they are system fonts. Maybe make the text header graphics so it reads better. I agree with vector mAsked about the caps.
- _salisae_0
nice work, xhanubis.
when i click on a piece and the window pops up it's not the most intuitive thing to figure out how to close it or cycle through the other images. the navigation for this is too separate imo. it gets lost in all of the gray.
- silentseven0
I would be careful of the screen shots like the NikeID. Did you do that or did the agency you designed the site for the copywriter do it?
- airey0
i like it. i'd agree with all the notes above, and i know a few things. unfortunately none of the things i know are design related.
- silentseven0
Oh and the lightbox script you might want to use another script that one your using is kinda janky.
Check this:
http://fortysomething.ca/mt/etc/…- agreed. user should be able to click anywhere to close instead of just the close btnairey
- kalkal0
My only comment is the background smoke seems a little too bright and distracting and is only emphisised more by being fixed. I suggest making it a little more subtle.
- Dancer0
Your type is displaying wrong (except Initial cap). It seems Antialias is switched off...
- _salisae_0
also .. remember that your book is only as good as your worst piece. you could consider showing only the best ~ quality over quantity.