Image Crit
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- grunttt0
yep. that's an image.
- moamoa0
I can just crit the font = letter spaing... especially the word BOOK
- JG_LB0
more cowbell
- Knuckleberry0
Text?
- skt0
not very now is it.
- doesnotexist0
can't really read it.
seen it a million times.- you mean its similiar to other peoples work?senseg
- I think he ment.. thats a style which is over since a long timemoamoa
- the whole digital blasphemy thing, you know?doesnotexist
- matt310
text should be white
- why?detritus
- maybe not white, but a lighter color..just kind of clashespencilpants
- so you can read itdoesnotexist
- skwiotsmith0
Overlay the text. GIve it a bit of transparency or work it better into the image...Just don't drop text on top of it.
- eb60
GRA
AG
OOK
- doesnotexist0
I would focus on illustrating the birds more, and not adding lazers and such, but if that's what you're going after ok then.
- refunktion0
the birds should shoot bees armed with lazers when they kaw, that would be pretty sweet.
- dyspl0
reminds me the "3d abstract" things we have all done back in the day :)
- i_monk0
GARBAGE BOOK
There's no visual hierarchy to this: the background is as dark as the foreground (birds), the lasers aren't enough to force contrast in that, and the transparent birds are black on black — and they're just scaled up from the foreground, no interesting cropping or anything there.
- gung_hoek0
the piece is ok imo. but the glow/light thing in the lower right corner does not integrate well. also the crows seem a bit like you took the same bird and just scaled/rotated it. maybe add another bird and finetune the lighting. also the clouds in the background don´t fit well. don´t know if it´s the colors or the contrast, or something else.