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- bolus
So, I just deleted and upload some photos on my website. Since I'm in a good mood, I'm willing to share this information, of course hoping for some constructive criticism.
http://www.janpostma.com/index.p…
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- benfal990
nice work. i like it. You are working with a digital camera? wich one
- elpaso0
could you please make some PREV + NEXT buttons
thanks :)nice photos!
- bolus0
I don't have a digital camera, everything was shot on film mostly with a mamiya 7 and a hasselblad
the prev/next buttons are underneath the numbers (they are rather small, you're not the first elpaso :)
- bolus0
can you give an example of which backgrounds you find distracting? thanks for the feedback
- nicnichols0
Some very well lit shots on there.. I have been to your site before, but didn't know that was you until now!
...and your cat is freaking huge!
--> glad to see some other film users on here though
- jaylarson0
I find the arm on the right could be cropped out, further showing the individual
isolated. it may create a more melancholic atmosphere for the image and the viewer.i would just crop it a bit here to remove the shadow on the right. but not too much.
one could argue that there is too much dead space in some of your photos, but as a graphic designer, i appreciate the experimental feel.i like the use of negative space in your images, so take my critiques with a grain or pinch of salt.
- Mirpour0
I like your photos.. very cool. you should put up some more party pics :)
- stewart0
great black/white party pictures.
and i don't really get the nurse in your backyard. what is that all about?- what's there to get, don't you have a nurse in your back yard too?flashbender
- i only have to balconies.stewart
- Llyod0
I don't like the lighting
- bolus0
what can I say Llyod, don't go out into the storm....