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- JG_LB
This is a redesign attempt for my work's site. It's a different page but we're basically looking at the navigation and content layout. 3 designers are working on different versions and we're all going to pitch to the boss. This is mine, successful?
Now: www.sitv.com
Redesign #1:http://www.juanluisgarcia.com...
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- phatlee0
Hmmn not sure, looks too close to the original. Try looking on here for inspiration
http://www.bureau-va.com/content…
- utopian10
Thanks for crashing my browser twice,.
One word "FAIL"
- Shepstar150
better than the original but I find the header a little boring
- gung_hoek0
the moods of the top (navigation, etc.) and the content part don´t go togehter well, IMO. the top´s style is packed and heavy, the content on the other hand very open. colorwise, same thing. the top is bright and fresh, the content much paler. i´d try to synchronize.
- I agree. those pastel looking green boxes need to change huh. thanksJG_LB
- wordsinyourmouth0
meh
- matt310
not bad - I'd tone down those background boxes in the body - go with something like #ebebeb - I'd also increase your leading on your body copy. open it up a bit more seems a bit constrained.
- seed0
I definitely think the first 3 and even 5 have a disconnect between the header and rest of the site. The content seems pretty well organized though. I like 4 the best because of the color tie in and the open space. Maybe the purple area could be more subtle but I still like it.
- moamoa0
#4 iis the best version...
the green yellow stuff is to reggea for me