Logo Suggestions/Crit 1717 Responses

Last post: 4 months, 3 weeks ago | Thread started: May 24, 08, 3:18 p.m.

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• epete22

  Synopsis. I am doing a logo for a crazy lady who wants something for nothing. (I wont get paid much) Therefore I am not going to spend alot of time on this project. But i would like suggestions about what you think. The only requirement was to have a logo icon that can stand alone from the text if need be.
  

  

  May 24, 08, 3:18 p.m. – Permalink

• epete22

  I am not worried about type or kerning at the moment, just the symbols

  

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  Dog-earMay 24, 08, 3:19 p.m. – Permalink

• detritus

  I like where #2 is going (though don't like the imbalance between the two sides) - what do the flamey wing things represent, if anything?

  #1 looks like some kind of Americana diner thing, #3's.. well, I don't like it and #4's a bit dull and uncontrasted. So yeah, she'll probably fo for #4.

  • #2's also a bit 'crazy lady'.– detritus

  

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  Dog-earMay 24, 08, 3:25 p.m. – Permalink

• organic_grid

  Regardless if you are getting paid a little bit or alot, you have a unique opportunity to design a great logo that will help you build your reputation and your portfolio!

  BTW
  I would combine the typography of #2 with the graphical symbol of #3, that will looks sweet, nice logos, good luck epete22.

  • Sometimes that's easier said than done.– 2cents1/4

    There will be more contrast when I start using color– epete222/4

    i agree with using #2 font & #3 symbol :)– sea_sea3/4

    mmm... contrast doesn't have much to do with color.– TaylorB4/4

  

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  Dog-earMay 24, 08, 3:27 p.m. – Permalink

• epete22

  the wings on are just supposed to be "uplifting because they take less fortunate kids and teach them music

  • In that case, I really like that one.– detritus

  

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  Dog-earMay 24, 08, 3:34 p.m. – Permalink

• ismith

  Well I can't say that I like #3, but I think it's the strongest so far.

  • The symbol that is.– ismith1/2

    Strongest as in... most recognizable. #2 will be better though, see detritus' comment– ismith2/2

  

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  Dog-earMay 24, 08, 3:37 p.m. – Permalink

• drgs

  nr 3 is horrible

  maybe nr 1, its long though, fit in in two lines?

  • 3 is horrible thats why i have the questiion mark– epete22

  

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  Dog-earMay 24, 08, 3:38 p.m. – Permalink

• epete22

  4 reminds me of Dr Suess for some reason.

  • i ment three– epete22

  

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  Dog-earMay 24, 08, 3:39 p.m. – Permalink

• Jaline

  I actually like your work so far. 3 is busy, but I like it. It would most likely work better without the text.

  I have to agree with detritus about the diner aspect of #1, but that's one of the ones I would further work on.

  • Americana cant be bad, i mean i am in texas but i will try and make it more modern– epete22

  

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  Dog-earMay 24, 08, 4:04 p.m. – Permalink

• Complexfruit

  #2 because of the "uplifting kids" bit, it seems to go along with that pretty well.

  

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  Dog-earMay 24, 08, 4:17 p.m. – Permalink

• akrokdesign

  no.2 is the new no.1. :-)

  

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  Dog-earMay 24, 08, 5:20 p.m. – Permalink

• capsize

  duo...hmmmm

  

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  Dog-earMay 24, 08, 5:54 p.m. – Permalink

• jaylarson

  #2. Try it with just the clef with out the wings. that'd be pretty classy.

  

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  Dog-earMay 24, 08, 7:52 p.m. – Permalink

• jevad

  2 is the more 'refined' looking of the bunch but needs more work - simplify.

  

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  Dog-earMay 24, 08, 9:16 p.m. – Permalink

• epete22

  thank you suggestions.I need more art direction until i can get my style truly nailed down.

  • pisstake– jevad

  

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  Dog-earMay 24, 08, 9:59 p.m. – Permalink

• monNom

  #2 is strongest, and probably pretty close... though on second look it's kinda "Dallas Uptown Motorcycle-gang"

  

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  Dog-earMay 25, 08, 12:18 a.m. – Permalink

• forcetwelve

  #2 for sure - needs work though to make the symbol a stand alone graphic. i like the type, if only in early stages.

  

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  Dog-earMay 25, 08, 12:25 a.m. – Permalink

• moamoa

  #3 - another font & a clean vector & another size relation

  

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  Dog-earMay 25, 08, 1:45 a.m. – Permalink