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- myshoeshurt0
why is the contact us girl trying to talk into a cup?
you know that doesn't work right?
- designer4rent0
the music was enough for me to leave, then poor fonts compounded the pain, maybe turn down the suck.
- spendogg0
Footprints are HOT right now!
- T-Dawg0
In my opinion, You should work on making the content the appeal and not all the flash elements, I think you're missing the target.
If it were up to me, I'd cut most the flash, navigation included, and focus on making the center of the page stick out more.
- moamoa0
no no no... is this web 1.5?
horrible
- falcadia0
Wasn't there just a thread about bringing back flash intros for creativity sake. Perfect example of why they suck.
- jkmohr0
once the music kicked in i was gone.
- hahajosimar
- +1 Hahahahahauncle_helv
- +1. in my opinion, the music must go.Ampersanderson
- no need for music or flash in my opinionChazolta
- Jnr_Madison0
Are you lost?
- scribbler0
i'm really not running with the moving banner thing at the top.
- johnnnnyh0
fraid the music killed me too
- 7point340
could do without the flash intro
1. no one likes flash intros, they are old hat
2. seemed very art/college student
3. apparently it has cheesy music (don't know didn't have the sound up) which just makes an intro even more aggravatingalso a few too many colors or maybe i'm just not feeling the ones you picked?... and i personally could do without the logo/icon bullets
- basically go back to the drawing board then ?WeLoveNoise
- yeah, i'm trying to be constructive... but i really am not feeling it, this design just seems dated7point34
- kult0
Random typefaces... everywhere
- studderine0
soooorrrrrrrrrrry.
- Jaline0
The images seem random and messy too. They need to be cleaned up and cropped more appropriately.
- ian0
loose the intro. the whole intro. Then burn all the storage devices that hold the song on the intro. Its not that its truly bad it just sounds exactly like music from a really shit corporate educational video.
- Mojo0
I loved the 90s. I was a child, but nonetheless it was wonderful.
- ukit0
Well, you will have the over 60 crowd locked up with a design like this
- BattleAxe0
your header is just doing much and taking up 50% of the page, cut that by 75% or just get rid of it
- 23kon0
did you steal the intro from the year 2000?
get rid of the intro and communicate the same message in the top banner of the website in the flash area.
make the main navigation in html otherwise google is never going to find and index all the content on your site.
homepage is 'alright'
the left column on the lower level pages is WAYYYY too wide, tighten up these pages to the same tighter grid of the homepage