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- Samush
ok qbn, please be gentle... this is my first proper logo, its for a travel site that is just a personal project in its early stages at the moment.
So if you would, i'd love some comments on the logo and the name.
Thanks
- tasty0
I was reminded of birdhouse skateboard initially.
I think the font color isn't right just yet but the typeface is cool
pretty sure it's custom if so check the outer curve on the "S" i see a little ridge when it starts curving downward.
- cheers tasty, the type is a bit like birdhouse. i'm not sure what you mean about the "S"Samush
- utopian0
- Somehow kill the rainbow, if nothing else...utopian
- that brown is still off to me..brains
- I agree the brown is a little off Brains.utopian
- cheers, i quite like ur re-touch. my curved lines had a bit more of a sky/earth/core sort of idea (ish)Samush
- so it's true: utopian talks big, but sucks hard.max_prophet
- brains0
I'm not sure how much this says "travel site". I guess it depends what kind of audience you're trying to appeal to. I agree with tasty and the typeface color.. As for the typeface itself, again, depends the tone of the project, I'm not crazy about the choice, but it all depends.
- gramme0
no rainbow, or do something cleaner like what Utopian did.
Concept is good, type is bad. I would not use that font, it looks amateurish. The bezier curves on the b, e, p & s are not clean. I would start with a geometric sans of similar weight, then modify the letters in some way.
- utopian0
Try the "Hops" in green!
Blue + Green = Earth (nature, water, eco friendly, etc...)
- creative-0
Something is telling me the 'arcs' should be linking the 2 'o's. Maybe it's because of the word 'globe'
- gramme0
Careful you don't get too CitiBank with it.
- sureshot0
I would make the "O" the planet earth.
- Knuckleberry0
Put a break in the rainbow in the middle, probably 1/8" inch. This would make half the rainbow blue and half brown. It would be easier for cross platform manipulation. Alsi the font looks verically stretched, which in my opinion looks wrong, correct please.
- utopian0
How about some dashes looking like it is hopping from the "o" in globe, to the "e" in globe to the "o" in hops with the same weight and shape and the rainbow?
- brains0
what about trying it with a different typeface? just as an experiment?
- Samush0
NOTE: my logo image up top has been auto-scaled! my bad.
- OSFA0
I'm not sure about the rainbow....
- gramme0
DITCH THAT FREAKIN FONT