New Site Crit
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- chaimelimeliah
Just dropped this today... not completely finished but would like some feedback...
keep in mind, the client, the subject and the lack of assets...
- detritus0
Birds of a feather, eh?
- ukit0
Hmmm...it's alright. Nice and clean, and as you say it seems to fit the client. Only thing I would say is that I expected the Flash to do a little more at the top of each page. If it 's just a pic it's hardly worth having Flash.
- subimage0
Clean except for...
I think the text needs more leading, and not feeling the sans-serif for the headers.
- TResudek0
I agree with subimage. I messed with it in Firebug and found that I really liked it with line-height:20px; and color:#5C5C5C.
- ismith0
I don't like having squares all over the place (I think the worst is on the main image), but that's just my opinion.
- stoplying0
Its good
I would've tried to make the text work without using those white slider bars. Just text over the image itself. The pace of the transitions seems too fast. Nice though otherwise.
- monNom0
looks like a rushed job.
Why kind of crit are you looking for, given the "keep in mind, the client, the subject and the lack of assets..." bit? It sounds like you already know it's not particularly strong.
That said it's clean and professional, no real mistakes. I think some further development of the graphic elements, and some general polish is needed before it's anything more than par for the course.
- utopian0
One too many squares... The logo looks nice with the squares as a symbol, but kill all the square decorations everywhere else, it dillutes the logo and the pages begin to look like a "birthday party for squares".