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• marychain

  Between these two
  Layout & colorwise

  

  

  Mar 5, 08, 8:26 a.m. – Permalink

• sherman

  #1 its got more pop and definition.

  • please don't ever use the word 'pop' unless you're 45 or older and you own a small crappy business .. thanks– jharbort1/2

    clients that ever used that word in my presence are still missing their loved ones..– vrmbr2/2

  

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  Dog-earMar 5, 08, 8:29 a.m. – Permalink

• doesnotexist

  2nd one looks way cleaner

  

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  Dog-earMar 5, 08, 8:30 a.m. – Permalink

• neverblink

  1. is younger
  2. is more 'business'

  • and yes, #1– neverblink

  

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  Dog-earMar 5, 08, 8:31 a.m. – Permalink

• JesusChrist

  #1

  it is the word of the lord

  • Truth is an odd number...– skwiotsmith

  

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  Dog-earMar 5, 08, 8:32 a.m. – Permalink

• spendogg

  the colors on the 1st one are off and the sign painter font is clashing.

  • Agreed on the font...– skwiotsmith

  

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  Dog-earMar 5, 08, 8:33 a.m. – Permalink

• Fariska

  can we have some bg info about the client in order to crit better?

  • art institutes are a system of schools with assoc, bach & master degree in Design, Culinary, Fashion etc– marychain1/2

    average student age is about 24– marychain2/2

  

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  Dog-earMar 5, 08, 8:34 a.m. – Permalink

• inhaler97

  Art institute is a chain of schools around america offering degrees in design, photography, illustration, 3d modelling, animation, anything in the arts, (including culinary).

  

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  Dog-earMar 5, 08, 8:36 a.m. – Permalink

• capn_ron

  I prefer #1. It is more artsy in color. I agree it is more youthful as well.

  

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  Dog-earMar 5, 08, 8:38 a.m. – Permalink

• Fariska

  I'd go with #1
  Less boring and more on target.

  

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  Dog-earMar 5, 08, 8:47 a.m. – Permalink

• MediaPimp

  #1. it's friendlier. something about #2 makes me think of politics.

  

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  Dog-earMar 5, 08, 8:50 a.m. – Permalink

• tasty

  #1 is perfect for the market.

  If it was a culinary school i'd say #2.

  

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  Dog-earMar 5, 08, 8:52 a.m. – Permalink

• 734

  definitely numero 1, prefer the colors and the layout

  

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  Dog-earMar 5, 08, 8:55 a.m. – Permalink

• marychain

  Thanks All!

  

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  Dog-earMar 5, 08, 8:57 a.m. – Permalink

• mg33

  # 1.

  

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  Dog-earMar 5, 08, 9:13 a.m. – Permalink

• thenuge

  #1

  

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  Dog-earMar 5, 08, 9:16 a.m. – Permalink

• skt

  Needs more shiney.

  • I mean less shiney.– skt1/4

    it's a glass room man.
    
    dont fight the "web 2.0" it's overused but it's what eveyone wants these days.– tasty2/4

    wants!– tasty3/4

    No, more.– detritus4/4

  

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  Dog-earMar 5, 08, 9:17 a.m. – Permalink

• rson

  needs more art f#$g

  • # 1– rson

  

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  Dog-earMar 5, 08, 9:20 a.m. – Permalink

• monkeyshine

  Maybe it is just me but #1 looks a bit like a Disney site...or a site directed at 14 year olds. I think it's the color choice and the typeface is weak.

  From a prospective student perspective, nothing about this speaks to cutting edge or technologically saavy.

  

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  Dog-earMar 5, 08, 9:30 a.m. – Permalink

• JerseyRaindog

  I prefer the colours of 1 but the layout of 2. Though I find both a little all over the place. Like a lot of websites I'm not sure where you want me to read first. There's no 'hook' and I'm left looking at a bunch of buttons...

  Oh god, I sound like some kind of client.

  • no your response was far more sensible, just cranky– 7341/2

    Cranky? I'LL GIVE YOU CRANKY!!!– JerseyRaindog2/2

  

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  Dog-earMar 5, 08, 9:34 a.m. – Permalink

• coldy

  Yea 1 is definitely too disney, Id restrict the color palette a little and lose the sign-painter font, its a retro-ish vernacular that I dont think an arts school should have.

  

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  Dog-earMar 5, 08, 9:37 a.m. – Permalink