Logo Critique
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- GT_10
Feels less like a logo, more like a piece of decoration.
- bulletfactory0
The Cap 'C' will definitely be something to try - I wanted to allow them to use either element separately, or combined in a pre-determined position.
I'll also try some more development on the flower, it may just not be sufficiently developed yet.
As I accepted this job for under a grand, further development is purely self motivated.
You guys are awesome thanks for your input!
- detritus0
A grand?
I'm undercharging :(
- bulletfactory0
under
- detritus0
unter.
Let's start ubercharging, BF.
£20k, please, guv.
- studderine0
v3.
- gramme0
Looks a bit like "love connection."
I get the dogwood thing, but you need to explore more concepts. a flower in conjunction w/ "connection" makes me think of a Christian dating service.
I like the font. I like the original ligature.
Try it with upper case "C" as an options.
Did you really just show them a handful of variations on one concept?
Call them. Don't email them again. A lot of church people get so many emails that they only answer emergencies or very pertinent queries.
- version30
i like your style studd :D
- Llyod0
the last one
- VectorMasked0
umm
v3
though I think of sex with those logos.
Kinda reminds me of madonna and her "erotic" days, or prince and enigma.
- josimarX0
add some chicks in bikinis with guns and you're golden.
- tasty0
v3
- mrseaves0
def. v3
- bulletfactory0
I heard back from the client, and got their input - They liked the dogwood flower mark, but were worried they would be constantly explaining what it was and the symbolism behind. They wanted to go in a direction of one of the other concepts I presented, which used a tree silhouette. These are just roughs, so line quality and kerning haven't had the attention they deserve. Hoping to get your thoughts on this direction. Thanks everyone!!
- bulletfactory0
thanks for taking a look everyone!
gramme - I presented 4 preliminary concepts that were different directions - two were sans typeface, another used a tree to form the letter "T" in which the limbs stretched over the word a bit. I want to develop that into a stronger option, but they got the idea from the prelims. I was waiting for their input and a direction.
I do really like the original ligature.
I hadn't made the dating connection, but i will now - every time I see it. awesome
I thought it was funny that during the bulk of development one night, Sin City was on TV in the background, seemed like odd background noise to work on a church logo.
thanks again!!
- waynepixel0
I like the last one the best combined.
- studderine0
interesting. v3 interesting.
- gramme0
$1k US dollars is peanuts for a logo.
I too have done greatly discounted work for friends & for my church, but usually charge at least $1500 US for a logo, and that's if it's a small organization...larger companies, the cost could get all the way up to $20k.
- detritus0
Oops, I thought BF was in the UK.
ie. != £