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- meffid0
I need some more help on this please peeps.
I need an example of pages that offers loads of services, free and paid for but organises and identifies it's products and sections easily. Our sales messages is piss poor currently and ANY help would be very much appreciated.
- meffid0
good feedback, anyone else??
- Bottlerocket0
Good copy will help lead you into the content more.
Basically when I see that list, its like 'well, why here, why real? Its just links I can get on iTunes anyway'
the point of differeince, if there is any, is lost on this page.
- meffid0
yeah agreed... BUT that's what we wanted to avoid slightly; reason being it's a place to get the player simply, less upselling and content smashing and bombarding. just need the player? go to the page kinda thing.
when you open the player the homepage lands on the music section for browsing, upselling, free accounts etc
- 23kon0
aye, looks like a lower lower level page.
you need to tell people the offer/benefits/brand messages etc
- Bottlerocket0
My comments still apply to this page I think.
Lots of links, not enough messaging or benefits. Nothing to lead you into the content.
- meffid0
click a music/video or games tab? or not seeing them?! :S
- Bottlerocket0
I am only getting the downlaod pae it seems:
Thats what I was referring to specifically
- meffid0
bottle: can you post link you're referring to please? the dload page? or the music home page?
thanks good comments
- Bottlerocket0
well look at the rest, it's meant to simplify the process of getting the player without taking cc details.
try other parts of the service or a trial.
meffid
(Feb 22 07, 02:2Gotcha now. I reckon you can still imporve the messaging of the benefits such as the music access, variety of media to view, etc a bit stronger rather than lisitng links to content providors.
- moth0
But at the moment it looks like a stylised download page. No mention of any benefits or anything. A few cool pics and some reflective buttons.
Bottlerocket
(Feb 22 07, 02:19)He's right. Now I look again at the deeper pages it's almost a Sedo advertising page...
- moth0
PC - FF
- meffid0
well look at the rest, it's meant to simplify the process of getting the player without taking cc details.
try other parts of the service or a trial.
- Bottlerocket0
Not sure where the site sits in relation to the rest of the real websites.
But at the moment it looks like a stylised download page. No mention of any benefits or anything. A few cool pics and some reflective buttons.
- meffid0
on a mac?
- moth0
Not sure I'm that excited by it.
Your top box doesn't line up with the bottom-right box on the home page and that bothers me a lot.
- meffid0
I'm all hood, not street.
- moth0
Gee. I and thought you being "street".
- meffid0
was in the PBS http://uk.real.com/ please comment on design, bugs and usuability.
??? foolish.
- Bottlerocket0
??