what do you think?
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- mpfree0
I think it's great!
- joyride0
looks good piper, Good Job!
One pet peeve of mine is just putting the flash onto an html page. I would add some sort of boarder around the edge of the scene. So it sits nicely on the page. but that might just be MO. Still looks great though
- harlequino0
I really like the concept. However, it seems really awkard and unfortunate how it starts off really Xmasy, then does an about face and blatantly crosses out the greeting and abandons holiday colors for a very sterile ending.
I realize the need to acknowledge a broader holiday greeting for a corporate card, but I felt kind of sad at the end. IMHO.
That aside, the design and execution is really nice.
- tomkat0
looks really nice! the timing could need a lil tweak though, the end comes really surprising
- piperboytoy0
thanks guys.
I just had a talk with the client and they said that a few people didn't get the animation.
the concept of this is to show the line from Concept to execution. not sure if that is being made.
now i'll have to change it tonight. sux.
- k0na_an0k0
I really like the concept. However, it seems really awkard and unfortunate how it starts off really Xmasy, then does an about face and blatantly crosses out the greeting and abandons holiday colors for a very sterile ending.
I realize the need to acknowledge a broader holiday greeting for a corporate card, but I felt kind of sad at the end. IMHO.
That aside, the design and execution is really nice.
harlequino
(Dec 18 06, 06:53)I agree 100%
Also, I had to watch it twice before I understood what was going on. The anim/order of operation is a bit off. Needs to have maybe one or two more steps. Nice start. I really like the imagery.
- piperboytoy0
thanks, i think i'll add a few more steps, just so time consuming.
- k0na_an0k0
I don't think you need a few more, maybe one or two.
Maybe the quick solution would be to better say "Step 1", "Step 2" "Finished product" or whatever.
I couldn't follow it at first cause I didn't see that it was a stepped process.
- piperboytoy0
yeah that is a good idea. the client wants me to add a designer too.
Thanks kona and everyone for your suggestions!