Jennymarie Site Crit
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- JennyMarie
Okay so my secret life as an actor is now revealed. Will you please crit my site? Need functionality feedback as well.. Just moved to Austin from NYC and I updated to reflect the changes.
http://www.jennymariejemison.com…
Thanks ya'll
- jevad0
Nice! I like to timeline in teh 'Story' section.
- e-pill0
the "updated reels" font is blurry
all the fonts that are Pixelated are shopwing up blurry on the Grey backgrounds.
at the "news" section the white font is almost disappearing in the area above your lips gooing up, its there but can be hard to see especially hwere the area f your shoulder hits the blanket, maybe chose a dark colour for the font instead of white.
i like it!!!
sad to see you live nyc but good luck on your new career!!
:)
- mr_snuggles0
I thought I could step to you with a fresh pack of gum...
- JennyMarie0
Austin's pretty rad but I have to get a driver's licence and a car and i'm scared.
think i'm going get me a pickup truck
- radar0
looks good, the nav is not as crisp as other text - other than that nice job - I like the timeline.
- k0na_an0k0
Very nice. I recognize you from the Radio Shack commercial. How funny.
The text at the bottom of the home page is a bit fuzzy, and it's fuzzy in some other areas on the site.
In a few places with your photo as the background, readability is an issue, but it's not as bad as it could be.
Real nice though. I like.
- e-pill0
it just hit me, you are the same Jenny responsible for illustrating the Palm Leaves and the Trees for San Andreas GTA right!?!?!
why are you leaving the illustraion world?? you are soo great!!!
good luck with acting!!!
:)
- emokid0
i like it. it's simple enough. i wanted to see dates (month/year) in the resume for each project but i am not sure what actor resumes should look like.
- Tara0
I really like your site and I think have a great "look" for acting. Good luck!
- tkmeister0
multi talented jenny
i think the components you used for the scroller and video can be a bit more designed. it's a bit hard to see.
maybe more photos will help. yes, definitely more photos.
- JennyMarie0
I'm not leaving it. I'm getting married. My fiance is a web designer that lives in austin. we're starting a little agency together. can't pay the bills as a actor. well, now that the radioshack money's spent. ;)
this is our web work site so far. it's still in progress really.
- radar0
don't take meetings in empty warehouses either, those are usually for porn - I learned the hard way - no pun intended :(
- robotron3k0
You've done lot's of acting work, and because I'm not crazy about that main image all the time, if it were to change it upon reload to another still I think that could be really cool and help to get across more of your experience. good luck in Austin, you better start liking tattoos and country music quick.
- joyride0
haha is he a ninja?
sites, nice btw!
- mrdobolina0
the golden goose is nice.
- blaw0
i'm partial to a lady driving a pick-up. i realize it's a bit stereotypical, but i always assume she is a no-nonsense individual.
- version30
i highly suggest no one google image search "hotties in trucks" for a funny pic for this thread. you will not find it.
- flavorful0
I like the site, sometimes the text is hard to read on the background but that's fine for the most part.
The pixel fonts ... yuck city.
The fortune cookie is hard to read as well.
Also, did you get that actually tatooed on yoru finger?
Wasn't there a thread abotu this happening up in Bean Town awhile back at some tatoo parlour, hahaha.
- flavorful0
i highly suggest no one google image search "hotties in trucks" for a funny pic for this thread. you will not find it.
version4
(Dec 11 06, 09:27)hahahha
- morilla0
a guy and gal have that same one here. Don't know if it was a 2 for 1 deal a tthe shop.