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- ldww0
have you been on the template monster site?
- Crouwel0
one
- mr_snuggles0
I
snugs,
- roughitup0
bland, sorry.
- monkeyshine0
I *just* saw this image in the book Re:Think Re:Design Re:Construct. How weird.
The design seems incomplete?
- k0na_an0k0
1 but it needs more.
i like the open space but there is a shitload of it. things don't looked connected together, more thrown in on the page wherever.
try treating the header the same as the footer. 'home sitemap interest list' don't have to be that big. toss them up in the right hand corner and splash abit of blue for a header.
i like the 'peeling' image but you need something on the left hand side to counteract that. what if when you click on a link, say pools, that one floats off on the left like the pic on the right?
also maybe a bit more contrast.
clean though. and i think it has potential.
- tasty0
feet.
I assume this is for a spa. I think it needs a little more life, everything is very square, when i think spa i think curves, comfort, luxury.
This says square bar of soap. play with some natural curves.
- mrbee28280
I agree with the it needs more thing. The feet might be good for a suporting image on the page but you might be better off going with a scene of the location of a main image. I also don't think there is much difference at all between the 2 to even say you have 2 comps. If you are going to show 2 you need more than a menu relocaiton.
- hiten0
more, and more line height also.
- wordssssss0
Hows about some imagery that relates to the section. like a pool or water or maybe soemm of those floaty wingy things. And also I would start over, at least restart the type.
- ldww0
- joyride0
¡Dios mío!
- swollenelbow0
dang, but it's on the other side ldww. =)
kbags, you can make it work for you...screw template monster.
- kbags0
shit, they copied ME!
I wuz gonna do all flashy lights of the outlines of feet, then bring the feet up with a tricked out JazX loop