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- pablink
Just uploaded this simple one-pager as I grew tired of my old site.
Let me know your feedback, ideas insults. etc..anythiung goes :)
- joyride0
about/projects links no worky
- pablink0
oops fixed....just dummy text for now
- monNom0
Nice subtle texture in the background.
The titles seem in the wrong place, i think above the section makes more sense.
It took a second pass before I noticed the little squares for the additional work. maybe a clearer navigation strategy is in order.
also not liking the bottom aligned project info, but that could just be a personal preference. I can't come up with anything solid why it shouldn't be that way.
nice work.
- jevad0
Description on teh side OR underneath - not both pls
- skelly_b0
might be nice if your logo and navigation didn't scroll with the nest of the page.
Also try to get the next project peeking into the page before I scroll. It wasn't obvious to me that there more to see.
- fresnobob0
I wasn't aware of the boxes pointing to more work. The "one-page" thing kinda threw off the fact that you don't just scroll, but click too.
- de4k0
i'd like the descriptions all underneath. and the background texture is too messy with the project borders, one or the other for me.
'about projects' nav would sit better above and horizontal if the descriptions are all underneath too.
- the-saint0
Descriptions need to be closer to the projects as well. they look isolated
- pablink0
Thanks for all your feedback guys!! i''ll be back with the second iteration :)
- mrbee28280
Shout outs from the Dulles campus homie. Looking good man. 2x the copy. There's a couple of boo-poo-doos there.
- pablink0
yo bee!
nice to see you!
you're right the type is too small and crammed on PC gotta fix that....shut.
- MLP0
you have a picture of green day for queens of the stone age