Website comps crit
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- pablink
Client narrowed down to this layout here are some sibtle variations I posted.
Critiques welcome *preparing ego for harsh comments*
http://www.nuevostudio.com/walla…
http://www.nuevostudio.com/walla…
http://www.nuevostudio.com/walla…
http://www.nuevostudio.com/walla…
:-). thanks guys!
- Mojo0
Last one is good, the only thing that seems a bit weird is the WAG logo thingie.
Good job!
- mbr0
Looks good to me. I like them, particularly #1.
Yeah, that logo thing kinda throws it all off a little - nice and clean with a stain in the corner!
- Dublao70
I think the logo works best with #3
- aliceblue0
whats the logo thingy ...a female? ... looks tacky and not in the sense of horse "tack" (teehee)
otherwise ----NICE!
- Terminal270
number 3!
Looks nice with the faded edges.
- pablink0
thanks guys, yeah the logo is the best solution I could come up with, after the client requirement of using a bust by the main sculptor of the gallery as part of the logo
thanks for the feedback
- richie_gunnz0
Mmm, #3 is noice. I actually like the space above the nave created by the logo; however, what if the type is incorporated as a horizontal over the nav?
- asprin0
Logo looks interesting but but doesn't work. Comp #1 all the way...clean, simple, direct. White is the new white.
- ldww0
have you tried simplifying the logo trace a bit? take out some of the bumps in the hair and make the face/breast more recognizable?
my inital thought was it was an ink splot
- effort0
nice work. very clean and direct and so easy to use. i like comp #1 the best.
couple things to consider:
- contact link seems to be floating in space. not sure where to put it exactly, but it seems very random as is.
- this is a very minor thing, but the thumbnails are a few px below the top of the featured image. maybe align them across the top.
- and, yeah, that logo... simplifying the lines would help greatly. however, contrary to others, i don't feel it takes away from the design. it's a logo -- it's supposed to be eye-catching. that said, the WAG part seems awkward. any way to take it out of the graphic and have the text stand alone?
- finally, a personal erik meyerish quip: i'd recommend setting a different color for links/action items. i know this isn't amazon.com, but still it might be good to make that purchase button pop a bit -- same for links to other artists, etc. what about using the color from the logo?
again, nice work. feel free to ignore everything i said...
- pablink0
thanks guys for the critique...will be posting changes soon !!
:-)
- Seff0
i think keep the logo the same size you had in your initial post, but just make it a deeper grey
your layout is simple and clean.
run with it
- gabe0
ah, #3 was the winner.
a little bit of textue goes a long way. it helps to make the photos a bit more dramatic and interesting if you ask me.
- foreverwhatever0
i like the logo.
site looks good