logo crit part deux
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- monkeyshine
hi again. I've been reworking my logo type for benten. Comments appreciated.
- Jaline0
2, 4, and 5 are alright.
- robotron3k0
numba 4 me likey
- spendogg0
I like #4 - the others, not so much.
- Mimio0
#4
- chz0
4
- Jaline0
4 is definitely the best, but I chose 2 and 5 as well as seconds.
- _salisae_0
what is this for?
- rasko40
your kerning is all over the place, and your colour combos need some refinement imo.
maybe try brown with the green?
- monkeyshine0
thanks, guys. I don't know what I'd do without NT. Ya'll are the best. :)
- rasko40
oh I see.. yeah maybe 4
- grunttt0
i don't get it.
- monkeyshine0
Salisae, it's for a software product. Benten is a japanese name and want it to be simple, a little playful and incorporate some of the calligraphy.
- rasko40
I thought it was some kind of childrens product, maybe a little brash especially colourwise, maybe you will have to refine slightly.
- monkeyshine0
ah. thanks, rasko. yes, needs much refining, I know. I've been struggling with this a bit and on a tight timeline. bah. I'm admittedly not a great identity designer.
- nocomply0
#4 is the best.
it is simple and playful as the client asked for, but you should even out the kerning as suggested earlier.
- nocomply0
Also i think if you combine the brown from 4 and the pink from 3, it would be a better color combo. Pink in #4 is a little bright IMO.
- MLP0
i like 2 and four the best... seem the most cohesive and balanced between type and image.
i'm not sure what the background is on the company - why the two colors in the name?
- monkeyshine0
ok. I've replaced the first page. What do you think? Is the calligraphy overkill?
- mg330
1B and 1D are nice. Not so hot on the other ones.
- spendogg0
I feel like it needs to be contained.