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- loganmills
i posted a link to this on the public broadcast some time ago, but i'm leaving for new york in a couple days and was wondering if anyone would be willing to give me some last second suggestions, comments, etc.
thanks!
- wedgehead0
the body copy on your landing page and the righthand nav is hard to read.
otherwise..nice work
- kyl30
hook a brother up with more leading
- uberdesigner0
you'd best defenestrate your computer
- Jaline0
I'm not a fan of the pixel font you use (I forget the name of it). For example:
- Jaline0
ummm...yeah I don't have an example because your pop-up windows are in flash.
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you'd best defenestrate your computer
uberdesigner
(May 11 06, 10:27)have I started something?
- Mimio0
Like your OCL stuff, it's good, plus I can contiguously view it.
- loganmills0
to be honest i'm not that big a fan either, but i was told pixel fonts were the way to go in flash (that portfolio slideshow is the first flash i've worked on). someone pointed me to fontsforflash.com and that was the best looking free one.
defenestrate? somebody's mom got them a word-of-the-day calendar.
- loganmills0
now that i sound like a jerk, thanks for checking it out everybody.
- kyl30
just use verdana alias'd
- loganmills0
thanks for the tip.
to be honest i think flash is really clunky to work in and i'm not looking forward to ever having to use it again, unless of course adobe can turn it around.
- JerseyRaindog0
I haven't got any useful web criticism that you haven't already heard (besides I'm not a web designer so it's not my place) but...
I like your work. It's fresh, original, untainted by corporate interference, and shows a genuine enthusiasm for all things graphic. You could go in sveral directions.
Good luck, I'm sure you'll make it.