Crit my site? Thanks!!!
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- HafDed
Hi all ~
would like to hear your thought's on my site...Really appreciate any feedback I get & thanks!
- kyl30
speed it up, add some easing, and maybe some cow bell.
- mrbee28280
you're hot!
- k0na_an0k0
the animations seem a bit slow to me.
I like the layout and the photo on the landing page is slick. Nice way to show your work as well.
I'd suggest moving the 4 main nav links away from the left just a few pixels, give them some room against the edge.
You have a bunch of strokes around the edge but it all seems flat against the background, I know shadows and drop shadows are cliche' but it might help make the page stand out against the somewhat distracting background.
Pretty slick though otherwise.
- JerseyRaindog0
Pretty slick, but a helluva lot of spelling mistakes... I would get it proofread.
Also, and this is purely personal, i wonder if the copy is a little too conversational in tone. I would try an dmake it more businesslike.
- HafDed0
Thanks Kona - i agree totally.
- jaylarson0
The roll over effects are mapped correctly at first, but when I mouseover on Experience, the rollovers get out of wack
- tenpointtwo0
It's too clunky... feels a bit unwiedly. Animations could be much crisper. They look and feel like default flash tweening. Use some easing and speed them up a whole lot.
Overall the site looks like it's from 1999.
- cram0
not too shabby... some decent work in the portfolio too.
my only problem is the fuzzy flash text. test some different fonts. or just use system fonts like georgia or arial. or maybe get a flash font.
cheers
- uberdesigner0
very nice work.
I am sorry that you have to work for aol
- ldww0
loose the transitions.
having to watch the same transitio0n everytime i click something from the portfolio is annoying.
man i hate flash.
- radiculture0
looks good.
i'm at aol too. :)
- mrbee28280
sweet... and then there were 3
- canuck0
Maybe it's just my comp, but things move to slow.
- slappy0
need the javascript embed fix, had to click to activate...
- uberdesigner0
the work's good, the site is a bit rank
- foreverwhatever0
ok, maybe someone already said this, but im too A.D.D. to read all that shit, but the site looks great,
just please, please, take off the beep.
- HafDed0
thanks all! sorry aboot the beeps - i always have my machines muted while i listen to tunes & i totally forgot about those crappy sounds! (d'oh). hopefully i'll have time tp get another redsign soon - your comments are appreciated!
- Dancer0
Background image is far too jpeged and distorted.
Bleeps are awful
Frame rate needs to go uptp about 24fps
Too much animation going on for my liking.
Work is good but the shitty,slow,overdesigned site clouds it.
Sorry
- jamiller0
need the javascript embed fix, had to click to activate...
slappy
(Apr 19 06, 18:46)No, you need the IE fix for your browser.
And to HafDed are you using Flash 8?? Flash 8 has new text rendering capabilities that make it much more crisp. Another good thing to remember in Flash is to set all your text positions to whole numbers, no X=135.5 but instead make it 135.0. This should help out a lot.
Lookin good, a few fixes but nice.
- studderine0
its a site..thats for sure.