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- coco_ono
Three logo examples for a small town pharmacy - Linton Family Pharmacy.
They are wanting a retro look. What do you think?
- coco
- Melvetica0
I really love the top one (blue) and the bottom green one. The one to the right isn't as dynamic as the other two. It rocks. I really like the type as well.
In my opinion, it's done and dusted my friend!
- Jnr_Madison0
The blue one is the strongest and looking good.
- PonyBoy0
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bottom green is a winner - it feels less complicated than the other two - yet has more depth and definetly tells the story immediatly.
Well done, Ma'am!
- tommyo0
Blue is my least favorite: the shapes take away from the type.
Bottom Green is my favorite: tells the story quickly with style.
Right Green: good as well...maybe without the circles to the right? Those pull me away from the main pill.
Good job lady!
- PonyBoy0
Enter response:
hey tommyo....
shut yer hole!... you don't know sheeit.
- tommyo0
btw, I like the work you have on your blog. Tasteful. Cheers!
- tommyo0
haha what's up man? How've you been?
- PonyBoy0
Enter response:
eh... been doin' "". You? :)
I'm coming to vega$$ in May!!! Beer on the strip!... or how 'bout... Beer THEN WE strip!
woot!
sorry, lil lady - didn't mean to stear this hear wagon off the trail. *winks *spits tobakee
- mr_snuggles0
top left with some further refinement. The type needs some work and the spacing within your elements need a bit more consistency. You also lose the rounded 'openings' on the 2 open capsules, which you might want to explore. ie - either lose it on the closed capsule, or bring it back to the other 2. right now
you're playing with 2 visual languages..the type is too small with the other ones.
- mydo0
top left... just because.
- Dancer0
Blue one - way more interesting to look at, and slighty abstract in some respects. I like the simplicity in the form. Snuggles is right loose the curve in the middle of the closed capsule and give each half a different shade of blue. Also look at the spacial relationships between the elements.
Good work.
- coco_ono0
Great!
Thanks for the responses, I'll do some tweaking as per suggestion.
- Rand0
I like you and your work
- coco_ono0
Aww, ditto Rand. ditto.
___I like you and your work
Rand
(Apr 15 06, 07:24)