portfolio crit
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- Spix
beside my regular portfolio, i made this illustration portfolio that is not meant to be for regular clinents...
http://www.uponyoureyes.com/illu…what u guys think? is it simple enough?
- bradpitt0
WOW! Fantastic work dude, simple and nice. Love it!
- Spix0
thanks man..i thought of adding some text to each illustration, but i really dont have nothing to say...does it work without?
- bradpitt0
Dude don't add any text, leave it how it is. Let the illustrations speak for itself.
- nocomply0
I especially like your pictures with all the crazy lines (like the last one). I think that last piece is your strongest. Really nice work. I suck at drawing and art in general. You seem to have a natural talent for it.
- PublikStar0
Beautiful dude! Simple is always good!
- Spix0
thanks guys...i think i leave it like its now..with minimum of text...thats a good thing since i suck at spelling...
- monNom0
I'd put that last piture at the top, followed by your black and whites with the spray, and then maybe the black on blues...
strongest work should be on top.
nice work!
- cosmo0
i think that should go into onepagefolios.com
- PublikStar0
i think that should go into onepagefolios.com
cosmo
(Mar 8 06, 17:05)definitely man!!
- Spix0
hmm...i put the last one last, becasue i thought maybe it was the most offensive? but perhaps i re-think that since the portfolio wont be for those clinets that would get offended anyway...
- gfro0
For the purpose you stated, I give it an A+++
- kodap0
I like the illustrations- very professional...
You're in a good way on this field.but the footer message sounds a bit lame - if its what you like doing and it's not for regular clients, you shouldn't excuse yourself from possible comments. For me, I'd never think that its a massive amout of girls... in there..
keep it up !
- Spix0
thanks Kodap :D
yeah, the footer message was more like a joke...I need to tight that up a bit. though..
- canuck_II0
I too like the illustrations. The fact that your site is uber basic works well in showing the work. I would probably change the first image, some of the other ones are a lot stronger. No excuses necessary on the excessive female imagery.
- kyl30
- fresnobob0
Whats a special client? and Don't aplogize.
- who0
nice...
but why do you use such big fonts?
- 4cY0
i like the spontanious idea behind the big fonts. don't let designer-dogma kill you and make you end up putting it all in 9px. it is very nice as it is... the text sizes go well with the playfullness of many of your images, and thus emphasizes the characteristics of you as an illustrator.
well done.
- lofielectronic0
V Good.
- valentim0
illustration ***** girls***** big fonts*****