quick crit
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- toe_knee0
looks good. like the detail on the buildings. type is a bit lost though. maybe a thicker strock but not black?
- mattyd0
thanks man.
yeah, i was trying to keep the text in the foreground, but not have it be overpowering.
- jevad0
type is a bit lost
- ants0
she kinda looks like a fairy with the buildings being wings. not sure if that makes aaany sense at all.
- mattyd0
okay, ill go back and work on the type. seems like the general conscensus.
- shilohous0
jacket texture is nice
- paraselene0
this might be off-topic, but i'm wondering where you got the actual fashion for that piece.
is it by a london designer? cos it's not really a very london look, if that makes any sense.
- neenaw0
Type is really bad. And says nothing about London. Neither does the girl really. Or the foliage.
What's the point of the piece?
- neenaw0
I quite like the treatment of the image though.
- chossy0
I like it generally I think it could work with some.....work, but something makes me think 80's yuppie? is this what london is like still ? I bet it is aswell, bunch of bent shots yuppies are.
- paraselene0
go on, chossy, lecture us about the evils of city life...
*sips cocaine baguette
- chossy0
A guy from the city tricked my father into swapping his farm for a torch :'(
- neenaw0
A guy from the city tricked my father into swapping his farm for a torch :'(
chossy
(Jan 31 06, 02:26)Hahaha.
*drives off in bright red carrera whilst shouting into a rather large phone.
- paraselene0
A guy from the city tricked my father into swapping his farm for a torch :'(
chossy
(Jan 31 06, 02:26)best torch my pappy ever spent, too!
- paraselene0
damn you, skt!
*stomps gucci stiletto
- chossy0
The batterries ran out, it's tinky eating spagetti in the dark it feels like warm worms and bugs.
- paraselene0
want some of my cocaine baguette?
- chossy0
no way yuppie
- UndoUndo0
its all very nice, but looks like a foreigners view of what london(England) is